the love of my life

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by zackmack2000 ( extreme killer of the keys) on Tuesday, 03-Jul-2007 6:20:26

Every morning when i wake up,
I see your face.
You have such a sweet smile,
Such a sweet embrace.
No one is like you,
No one in this world
I just thank god,
That you are my girl.
I hear your voice in my sleep,
You talk of love, so true, so deep.
The love that we have is so strong,
Don't get me wrong.
I just want to be there,
Lieing down beside you,
Playing in your beautiful brown hair.
I know that we have to fight,
We have to fight, to make it right.
No matter what anyone has to say,
I'm gonna love you anyway
I don't care about what they do,
They can't take me away from you
One day it will happen, it will come true,
The day, that i finally get to see you.
I know we can make it, we have to try,
If you leave me baby then I just die
I am willing to fight,
Just to make things right.
You are, the love, of my life

Post 2 by maroon five (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Tuesday, 03-Jul-2007 6:31:46

aww that's so, um, I'm just lost for words Zack. I hope Lory loves it, cause, well, hell, your making even me cry.

Post 3 by midnight sun (you can't catch me, i'm the palobread man) on Tuesday, 03-Jul-2007 8:22:37

oh my god. i just don't know what to say this is making me cry too, i love it, and i love every little thing you do, i love you darling you are my life!

Post 4 by Winterfresh (This is who I am, an what I am about. If you don't like it, too damn bad!!!) on Wednesday, 04-Jul-2007 4:37:31

Oh Jesus that was beautiful. If I had been awake more, I'd be crying by now. Wow.

Post 5 by tear drop (No longer looking for a prince, merely a pauper with potential!!!!!) on Wednesday, 04-Jul-2007 5:22:49

while it was a sweet poem, it lacks some substance.
Though I hope it works for you two
cordially

Post 6 by Austin (the magic fan!) on Wednesday, 04-Jul-2007 8:02:02

damn zack... good job man.

Post 7 by japanimangel1 (Veteran Zoner) on Wednesday, 04-Jul-2007 11:27:03

nice on the poem, good job!! Sounds like a pop song

Post 8 by Selena Fan (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 04-Jul-2007 19:18:19

Zack that was so beautiful, it made me cry!

Post 9 by jen91_09 (777) on Thursday, 05-Jul-2007 16:34:51

WOY! ZACK THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFULL! i hope it works out that way for the 2 of you. Wow! Grate poem!
jenna

Post 10 by chelslicious (like it or not, I'm gonna say what I mean. all the time.) on Sunday, 08-Jul-2007 13:29:13

awwwww zack, how adorable!
best of luck to you and lorrie.

Post 11 by Winterfresh (This is who I am, an what I am about. If you don't like it, too damn bad!!!) on Monday, 09-Jul-2007 22:08:32

It's poems like these that make me feel warm inside. Great job, Zack.

Post 12 by lauralou (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 10-Jul-2007 16:44:15

that is good, sounds like a song... hmm

Post 13 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Sunday, 10-Feb-2008 20:58:44

You have a good sense of romance, and undoubtably that made it the most enjoyable.